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The jagged lines were kind of intentional. So many of my drawings are vector and they look so clean that they are lifeless. I thought I'd try something different. Color is a good idea, but I don't know if I have the physical and or mental energy (or the time) to get into that now. As for ripping, that's hardly a concern for me (so far anyway).
If I get the time, I'll try and squeak out another go at this one
1. Clean it up a bit - the lines are a little jagged.
2. Give it some colour - the shirt doesn't have to be white, and neither does the graphic.
3. You didn't actually have to include the file with your deviation. This is probably why it's being downloaded so much, because people CAN download it. If you're worried about people ripping your work or ideas, don't submit the file with the deviation.
I like the concept, I just think it needs a little sprucing up.
i wonder- it is now the #4 most downloaded, but not a single person chose it as a favorite. It must be that it looks cool at first and then upon close up it sucks.
I actually noticed a flub in my own drawing. the little guy that is dangling into the glutton's mouth is missing some fingers. This might have happened when I imported to AI from Flash.
Good Work!!!