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Gluttony by michaelpatrick Gluttony by michaelpatrick
Glutton-the image loses a little when reduced. If you download it you should be able to zoom in close.
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michaelpatrick Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2005
Thanks for the comments.

The jagged lines were kind of intentional. So many of my drawings are vector and they look so clean that they are lifeless. I thought I'd try something different. Color is a good idea, but I don't know if I have the physical and or mental energy (or the time) to get into that now. As for ripping, that's hardly a concern for me (so far anyway).

If I get the time, I'll try and squeak out another go at this one :)
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cleanup Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2005
Don't put yourself down, Mike. You still have two weeks. Here are some of my suggestions.

1. Clean it up a bit - the lines are a little jagged.
2. Give it some colour - the shirt doesn't have to be white, and neither does the graphic.
3. You didn't actually have to include the file with your deviation. This is probably why it's being downloaded so much, because people CAN download it. If you're worried about people ripping your work or ideas, don't submit the file with the deviation.

I like the concept, I just think it needs a little sprucing up. :)
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michaelpatrick Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2005
Still,

i wonder- it is now the #4 most downloaded, but not a single person chose it as a favorite. It must be that it looks cool at first and then upon close up it sucks. :)

I actually noticed a flub in my own drawing. the little guy that is dangling into the glutton's mouth is missing some fingers. This might have happened when I imported to AI from Flash.
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michaelpatrick Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2005
thanks :)
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ExaltedS Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2005   Interface Designer
No It aint bad.... I think it's cool and would definetly wear that shirt..........!!

Good Work!!! D
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michaelpatrick Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2005
interesting. of the hundreds of enntries in this contest, this shirt is the sixth most downloaded. Yet of all the people who looked at it, none of them have called it favorite or even commented. that bad, huh?
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